Sunday, June 9, 2024

Life Not Lived. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Going down the path
Of non-existence
Solitude,
A very narrow
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Sandra Feldman
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Koffi B Sossou 13 June 2024

The beauty of the poem lies in the use of word 'Love' and in how you chose to use it giving enough room for interpretation. A life in which you seek for love from everyone could be more painful. Self-loving is therefore vital.

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Koffi B Sossou 13 June 2024

Nice poem! Life without love is painful. Sandra, you intentionally left us in vagueness using 'Love'. What type of love are you referring to? family love, friendly love, partner, societal?

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Rob Lamberton 13 June 2024

"When deprived Of love"*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 June 2024

Life and love must exist together otherwise one could never feel and enjoy the wonders of existence. A powerful and heartfelt poem. So very true.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 June 2024

Bravo Very profound! ! ! ! TFS

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 June 2024

I cite your great poem here: Life becomes Like non-existent, When deprived Of love, So very very true! TOP Marks 5 Stars. I have enjoyed tremendously this poem full of Brilliance!

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