Thursday, February 2, 2006

Life Never Wanted Her To Be Happy Comments

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Grab a hold of this hand
because I am here for you
You have gone through so much
in your life and I'm sorry
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Mary Nagy 03 February 2006

I like this..........I think there are alot of people that just give up because they believe this, that life never wanted them to be happy. Great job. Sincerely, Mary

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 February 2006

Nice approach! I wonder, however. Does her unhappiness contribute to his happiness in 'life never wanted her to be happy'? I sense a contented understanding with this poem. L

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