Friday, February 19, 2016
Life (Naani Poetry) Comments
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Cynthia Buhain-baello
20 February 2016
Very nice Naani poem in 25 syllables - but it has to be four lines only. I suggest you keep the line Now I'm old, it's hard and sad as one sentence/phrase.
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8/7/2025 4:00:39 AM # 1.0.0
Thank you for a very nice comment ma'm and you're right, I forgot, it's a four line poetry.