Saturday, June 20, 2009

Life, Love And Friendship Comments

Rating: 4.3

Life is a tree
Friendship is flower
Love is fruit
You can smell the flower
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Vijay Sai R
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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 30 December 2012

simple haiku.. with great meaning and message...

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Wilbur Motholo 26 December 2012

I really think I like this poem. I have been trying to define life but now the poem says it all

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Cathy Shao 01 November 2012

Lemon tree very pretty And the lemon flower is sweet But the fruit of the poor lemon is impossible to eat :)

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Walterrean Salley 01 November 2012

Friendship is beautiful. It makes life very enjoyable. Everyone should have a friend. **Please visit my page and comment on any poem you'd like. Thank you Vijay.

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Gan Chennai 24 May 2010

Some flowers like Roses can be eaten. Some fruits like belladonna are poisonous. Just for joke. Good Poem.

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Sumita Datta 29 January 2010

Very cute poem... short and simple... well done.

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Savannah Smith-stinson 22 December 2009

I like it and though it maybe be small its verse holds a thousand meanings.

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Hippie Girl 16 December 2009

I like it, it's simple, but has everything to do with friendship.

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Anand Madhukar 20 October 2009

Pithily perfect. The comparisons are well drawn.

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a sweet allegorical piece! ! ! but the fruits and the flowers remain depend on the tree if you cultivate the tree you get sweet fruits and beautiful flowers really I loved it so much 10**************

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Marieta Maglas 23 July 2009

You can smell the flower and taste the fruit alone, but friendship and love should always be consumed by both.Wonderful sad realistic poem.10+++ from me

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Angel's lyre 18 July 2009

Short and great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! goooooooood jooooooooooob God bless :)

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James Bost 11 July 2009

WOW i like it so much i had to read it over and over ....and its a very short poem

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Angelica Ayman 30 June 2009

well written! ! ur feelings r good depicted in short lines so ur 10+++ GREAT JOB! ! !

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Catrina Heart 28 June 2009

symbolic poem written in just a few...great piece of craft.

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Louis Rams 27 June 2009

short and to the point, and it says it all. good write a ten

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Danny H 21 June 2009

thats wonderful: and true

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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