Saturday, November 10, 2007

Life Lost... Comments

Rating: 5.0

If only I saw what you see in me
If my eyes were open, If I was complete

But now I'm just a hollow shell
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Madison Riley
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Thomas Brant 11 November 2007

you are a very talented writer.

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Jennifer Hartman 10 November 2007

Well said! I think this is something everyone struggles with, something that is inherent in the human condition and you've expressed it poignantly

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