Thursday, January 23, 2020

Life Lives Betwixt Two Deaths Comments

Rating: 5.0

A story this of how Life proposes,
But Death is it that always disposes.
A king once dreamt a pre-dawn weird dream—
A forewarning— Death lives a life so rife,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kesav Easwaran 27 January 2020

Excellent narration to bring in a blatant truth. Rich and sweet poetry. Congrats poet. Eloquent piece in iambic pentameter. You seem to be well read. Your age, a proof indeed...10+

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 January 2020

Thanks for the compliment. A poem gets born in the heart as a nebulous thought. Hard work is required by the head to give it a beautiful shape.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 January 2020

A wonderful narrative on life and death sir! Though stanzas are losely structured, technically sounds good! Appreciated.....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 January 2020

Your insight on poetry is appreciated dear Dr Swain. Thanks

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