Life-Live Peotry Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Life-Live Peotry

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Life-Live poetry
Monday,27th July 2020

Life flows like river water
but never falters
while meeting hurdles
raises the water level and struggles

sometimes, it lowers the level
and doesn't swell the bank
no destruction and no threat
simply flow like verses and meet an end

what makes a real melody?
in the words of poetry,
life moves up and down
and fate remains known

let life make some compromises
and comprise
some suggestion
as how to maintain human relations

sweet or cruel
it looks very real
life has to move
and prove that it is no one's asset

Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

Life-Live Peotry
Monday, July 27, 2020
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Date & Time: 7/27/2020 1: 09: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 58852264 - Life-Live Peotry Member: Dipak adhya Comment: Life flows like river water but never falters...good observation... Well depicted...

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Date & Time: 7/27/2020 1: 06: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 58852264 - Life-Live Poetry Member: Aarzoo Mehek Comment: Life is beautiful inspite if the hurdles. Lovely thoughts.10+

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Dipak adhya 27 July 2020

Life flows like river water but never falters...good observation... Well depicted...

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 July 2020

Life is beautiful inspite if the hurdles. Lovely thoughts.10+

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sweet or cruel it looks very real life has to move and prove that it is no one's asset Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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