Saturday, February 3, 2007

Life Like An Hourglass Comments

Rating: 5.0

When its full, sands together,
Only when its empty, doe’s it matter,
A turn of a vial, rejuvenates its style,
When full no attention doe’s it gather?
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Charles Garcia
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Sandra Fowler 04 February 2007

Excellent write, Charles.Your title says it all. Warm regards, Sandra

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Melanie Emiko 03 February 2007

Very wise and transcribed into that kind of rhythm one hears only from poetry. Idea justified by the style.

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poetry lover 03 February 2007

I like this one very nicely done,

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Charles Garcia

Charles Garcia

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