Thursday, May 26, 2016

Life Like A Waterfall Comments

Rating: 4.8

Between the rocks of mountains
Emerged as the purest of spring
Gushing, whooshing and pushing
Over the rock by bashing and crushing
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M. Asim Nehal
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Mihaela Pirjol 28 May 2016

The imagery, metaphor, and alliteration at their best. A great poem!

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

Life begins like a waterfall till it reaches the fade end..10

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Kelly Kurt 26 May 2016

A very descriptive write and wonderful metaphor for the way life goes at times

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 May 2016

Ferocious water swash! ! Nice piece of work.

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Nosheen Irfan 26 May 2016

Excellent poem. It's such a beautiful descriptive write. Life described through the imagery of waterfall..awesome.10+++

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