Sunday, June 30, 2019

Life Leaves Old Joys Behind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Way back a child I had many a joys
As wonders, wandering in wanton worlds,
The joys jostling— trinkets with odd toys,
Happier felt I than free-flying birds.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 July 2019

This is a wonderful sonnet with vivid imagery! I find a great rhythm and rhyme....a perfect Shakespearan sonnet with the rhyme scheme: Abab, cdcd, efef, gg! Infact, it's not so easy to compose a sonnet but sir you are doing it so easily! A very commendable work....a beautiful poem!

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 July 2019

Yes, you are right, a sonnet is a beautiful verse form, 'Fourteen flying birds in formation' as I said in a sonnet elsewhere- a sonnet again in praise of sonnets. You might like to read. Thanks. .

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