Thursday, May 30, 2019

Life Is What It Is Comments

Rating: 4.9

In my reflection I saw another line
Like a tree stump showing its circles of life
A cracked path that's been walked on and weathered
My skin is not a bright as once was
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Jennifer Birchall
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Jane Campion 16 June 2019

Life is what it is. Que sera sera. Thank you dear Jennifer for commenting

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Muhammad Ali 30 May 2019

Lines in lines. Sadness is smiling and poem is perfect.

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Julia Luber 30 May 2019

the problem of aging well penned

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 May 2019

superb- life is life life is what it is

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Prabir Gayen 30 May 2019

The date says 26th June 2000 Still feel that young 25 year old Maybe still wish but these lines show life Life is what it is.. very beautiful

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Jane Campion 30 May 2019

We are all aging showing our circles of life. A realistic and interesting poem.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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