Thursday, August 21, 2014

Life Is Too Short For Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life ending quickly and has almost passed,
Nothing is remained; the limits have been crossed,
Like a dry leaf with a pale faded face,
No glory of the past, or shine or glace,
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 June 2019

He loved his mother more than anyone, The stem like his father who was next to none, The spread branches like brothers and sisters, The friendly leaves the naughty gangsters, And the lovely flowers like sweet charming girls, Colorful, fragrant, charming like pearls. wowowowwwwwww

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 August 2014

Beautiful poem with many captivating lines....I loved the fourth stanza a lot. very true said in few lines...... For a time passing love we need bright years, To find a true love we need light years. Very true said, one life time is not enough for love, to see the beauty of love. Loved reading it. Thanks for the wonderful poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 August 2014

unquenchable desire, beyond the dream, unending end, eon is less for love because love is so beautiful its like a glace by Allah...who will not desire to have this so the poet thanks

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Valsa George 21 August 2014

I see here the image of a man who is deeply in love with life and clings on to the branch like a paling leaf! He thinks that one life is not enough for true love! Really enjoyed the poem especially the comparison in the fourth stanza! Go ahead still thirsting for more love!

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Neela Nath Das 21 August 2014

Very short and little room for love.A fabulous poem with superb diction.10/10 I'll give.

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Heather Wilkins 21 August 2014

a beautiful poem each stanza holds a gem of a thought

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Biplab Singha 21 August 2014

Great! Amazing poem. I am very pleased to read...

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 August 2014

For a time passing love we need bright years, To find a true love we need light years. Beautiful lines

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