Sunday, November 24, 2024

Life Is Too Short Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is a precious gift of God
And we are sent to this earth for a purpose.
Life is transitory
It flows constantly
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Bharati Nayak
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Savita Tyagi 28 November 2024

Lovely Thoughts! Happy Thanksgiving.

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Belle Wassermeister 27 November 2024

Best poem I have read for quite some time! Thank you for sharing this, Bharati! Five stars!

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Richard Wlodarski 27 November 2024

Such a beautiful poem with so much wisdom. Your last stanza is the creed that we should all live by!

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

Thoughts of 'God', flowers, food, weather, politics, strife, etc. etc. etc. are enough to keep poets BUSY for the foreseeable future! ! ! ***** stars

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

As you may have heard, I, Bri, do not (though I used to) believe in 'God' or god(s) . As for 'a purpose', is the purpose for human happiness OR for gratification for some almighty creator of mankind? ? Or is it 'something else'?

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

To 'live every moment With love, kindness and peace' sounds like an unattainable goal. I'd accept having 'peace' even if I could NOT have all three. Some ice cream would also be 'nice' to have. : )

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

Icont.) both 'hatred' and 'animosity' refer to a strong dislike or ill will, 'hatred' is generally considered a more intense and absolute form of dislike

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

dear Bharati, I suggest 'every moment.....passes', not 'pass' ;) (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

(cont.) destiny definition 2: hidden power believed to control what will happen in the future; fate. 'he believes in destiny' Similar: future fate fortune doom lot portion due nemesis dole providence predestination divine decree

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

And WHO/WHAT controls/directs 'destiny'? ? DESTINY: /ˈdestənē/ noun the events that will necessarily happen to a particular person or thing in the future. 'she was unable to control her own destiny' OR..(cont.)

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

'TRANSITORY': tran·si·to·ry /ˈtranzəˌtôrē, ˈtran(t) səˌtôrē/ adjective not permanent. Thank god or the devil or both that LIFE is 'TRANSITORY'! !

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