Let the moon kiss my shoulders
The waves kiss my toes
I've waited a lifetime
For someone who knows...
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Carpe diem! ...and extra life points to whoever can Capre Dee. Love your philosophy Dee. Zen
You got it in one. Carpe diem! Eloquently put. t x
Hey Dee, do we have our own take on this or what? ! Which ever way, you've nailed it down to a true value. Ez X
light breezy flow...truly wonderful feel to this poem, Dee. lovely work! -Tailor
Dee, This is just one silly, seemingly inadequate word, but... ' WOW! ' B.V.A.
'Let the moon kiss my shoulders/ The waves kiss my toes' is a perfect opening to this charming piece. This one had to be written by Dee Daffodil. Something delightfully Wordsworthian about it - filled with light and playfulness and joie de vivre. love, Allie xxxx
Very good poem. And its so true. You should live life to the fullest.Tomorrow is never promised.
Yes, Oh Yes! ! ! ! ! What a great idea! I loved this one, it twinkled along with a gentle rhythm. A real pleasure to read. Loved it lots. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
oh, how I wish i could! beautifully put and I love those first 2 lines