Wednesday, July 11, 2007

Life Is Too Serious To Be Taken Seriously! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let the moon kiss my shoulders
The waves kiss my toes
I've waited a lifetime
For someone who knows...
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Dee Daffodil
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oh, how I wish i could! beautifully put and I love those first 2 lines

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Zen Bojczuk 13 July 2007

Carpe diem! ...and extra life points to whoever can Capre Dee. Love your philosophy Dee. Zen

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You got it in one. Carpe diem! Eloquently put. t x

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Diane Violet 13 July 2007

Love this Dee......wonderfully said! ! Hugs, Diane

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Hey Dee, do we have our own take on this or what? ! Which ever way, you've nailed it down to a true value. Ez X

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Tailor Bell 11 July 2007

light breezy flow...truly wonderful feel to this poem, Dee. lovely work! -Tailor

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Barry Van Allen 11 July 2007

Dee, This is just one silly, seemingly inadequate word, but... ' WOW! ' B.V.A.

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Alison Cassidy 11 July 2007

'Let the moon kiss my shoulders/ The waves kiss my toes' is a perfect opening to this charming piece. This one had to be written by Dee Daffodil. Something delightfully Wordsworthian about it - filled with light and playfulness and joie de vivre. love, Allie xxxx

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Heart Broken 11 July 2007

Very good poem. And its so true. You should live life to the fullest.Tomorrow is never promised.

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Ernestine Northover 11 July 2007

Yes, Oh Yes! ! ! ! ! What a great idea! I loved this one, it twinkled along with a gentle rhythm. A real pleasure to read. Loved it lots. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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