Wednesday, August 28, 2019

Life Is Terribly Absurd Comments

Rating: 5.0

All I have done otherwise today is worry and fret.
As for if there's any space in my mind and soul for good dreams yet.
I don't know what has confiscated me to this psychological debt.
But it is a trap I wish I could forget.
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Julia Luber
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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 September 2019

Because I am not sure if I will be able to speak another word, I have to rhyme. To make sure that I can still tell something and not become a mime. I have cited your two lines here- Even without Rhyme, you are an excellent poetess. I have enjoyed a very lot this impressive poem with that touch of humor, Julia.

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Julia Luber 07 September 2019

I am so glad you can 'hear' my humor. That is important to me…..thank you!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 September 2019

I can't believe what terrible things are living rent free (in all minds they do) in my mind.

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Ronell Warren Alman 03 September 2019

Good poem written here Julia! Rhyme those words to keep your mind off of things that seem to trouble or puzzle you! A good source of peace and comfort here.

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Julia Luber 03 September 2019

I'm glad you muse upon the peace and comfort through the rhyme and poetry rather than the fretting and other 'critical depression' which some readers focus on. Thank you for reading and replying.

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Savita Tyagi 30 August 2019

When life seems absurd and no questions are answered, a challenge of creaing a rhyme offers a solace and a comfort. Great poem.

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Julia Luber 02 September 2019

Exactly! Thanks for your agreeable insight, reading, and response.

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Liza Sudina 29 August 2019

Poetry brings joy and happiness and deep sense to this world, Julia!

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Julia Luber 02 September 2019

Yes it does. So do readers and responders.

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Gary James Smith 29 August 2019

Good poem Julia...very insightful as to explaining the free rent residency that takes place in our mind...praise God He can give us true peace and joy in our mind and heart when we embrace His Word and let His Holy Spirit make it effective and affective in our lives to His glory...in Jesus name...amen! Have a wonderful day Julia..

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Julia Luber 02 September 2019

Nice explanation and moment for a comment on Jesus Christ and the purposes of praising God! Thank you for reading and responding.

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Panagiota Romios 29 August 2019

I just answered this,

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Panagiota Romios 29 August 2019

I get all your comnents. I just never know if I Pist mine in the right place. It's too long to explain, I have an idea for you. Try writing couplets ot footies. I do that sometimes when my mind will not shut up. We do all have that to one degree or another. We get entrenched in the Battlefield of the mind. I am off to bed.talk tomorrow, Panagiota

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C F 29 August 2019

There is so much anguish in your words, your helpless dilemma is palpable. The writing style of this particular poem lends credibility to your words …. but hoping this is just a style, and a mood, and a passing disillusion, and that tomorrow, you will wake up to a brighter day.10+

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Julia Luber 29 August 2019

I am surprised the anguish comes across so strong. I thought that by indicating life's absurdity, there might be a bit of humor but as I reread it, I do feel it is plodding through thick wordless sadness.

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Panagiota Romios 29 August 2019

I raged your poem high but going mad because I never get a reply button. Anyway, excellent poem. The mind ruins many lives. Rhyme helps. When your mind talks crazy to you, just thank you and move on, , rated is the second word, Cursor won't go back in submit box Panagiota Romios

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Julia Luber 29 August 2019

Are you telling me you haven't been getting my replies to your comments? I have made some responses. The PH system is very fickle and unpredictable. I have replied. Maybe they'll default them all at once.

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Julia Luber 29 August 2019

I have made many replies to your comments. I think there is something glyphing about PH. I always like your comments and respond. I don't know why these response haven't reached you.

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Sandra Feldman 29 August 2019

The weight of despondency Of not being able to go on Have something positive To hold on to, Is vividly transmitted Thru anguish, in your words Deep thoughts and fears Do wear you down. Very well written, we feel you fears, but we all feel that way once in a while. It becomes very dangerous if it is permanent. Up to you not to let it be, enjoy your writing talent. It's what makes you free.

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Julia Luber 29 August 2019

Sandra, your comments are always compelling. Please don't take my 'anguish' too deeply; I use my poetry to 'cathect' those conflicted regions of my soul.

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Sandra Feldman 29 August 2019

Glad, to know. Relieved. I often do the same, maybe not as strongly, but I understand. Take care and keep on writing what ever wonderful or otherwise comes to soul and mind. Outstretched hand, Sandra

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Denis Mair 29 August 2019

Kick those deadbeat tenants out on their aXXes! Hop on the rhyme machine and steer by intuition toward the most beautiful entanglements possible. I'll gladly eat your dust. For further friendly advice, see my poem: I WANT TO BE YOUR PERSONAL POETRY TRAINER.

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Julia Luber 29 August 2019

I am going to read that poem when I am in a slightly different mood. For now, I'm enjoying this fabulous comment you've made on my poem. Thank you.

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 August 2019

'Rhyme is like a machine that takes one from word to word. Without it I might sound like nothing but a garbled bird.'.. is very true. Rhyming makes poetry sound sweet. Loved it.

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Julia Luber 29 August 2019

I appreciate your inspiring comments and am happy you liked my poem!

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