Life Is Sweet Comments

If you use more punctuation, it might help me to read as you intend it to be read. ;)

I just read your Haiku-Senryu Story and loved it. But I don't love this one. I say it needs some serious editing, but I shall not take the time now to explain. If you ask me to, I will explain. bri : )

There is nothing like "selfless love". Unless you love yourself, you don't love others.

Lovely poem. Exudes lots of positive energy. All the five stars and onto myfav

And cute poem for cute life. Full Stars

WOW A 5 PINTER

.. health is wealth....so well penned.

Revisiting.

Wonderful one

A fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

very beautifully spoken.......full credit

nicely spoken......10 out of 10

This life is indeed sweet and cute Who are blessed with health and sound mind.......beautiful expression about life

Beautiful allegory. Indeed there is nothing as prescious as health and happiness within rest all come and go meeting the purpose but these remain forever with smile. Beautiful work. Admirations and appreciation.

SHHHHHHHHHHHHH SHH? ....? .....