Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Life Is So Short Comments

Rating: 4.8

Smooth as glass above where never it rains.
Calm and quiet, so quiet the ear strains.
Color's so vivid they seem to have flavor.
Waiting for all where none are shown favor.
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Sally Plumb Plumb 19 November 2012

Intense piece.

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Mark Dillon 26 October 2012

nice write Jack, i've had times when i wished the day would end, aye

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Silentpoet Grl 04 January 2012

Brilliant poem! - thought provoking -

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jack green

jack green

Chattanooga, Tennessee
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