Monday, October 22, 2018

Life Is So Automatic Comments

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Life is so automatic
it will push you into another day,
the morning sun will wake you
the noon will make you hungry
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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 October 2018

Jacson, such a well crafted poem....................

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Ruta Mohapatra 22 October 2018

Quite true! But you have painted a pleasant family picture where everybody is taken care of, a family where the bonds are strong. It comes out automatically in your poem! Thanks for sharing!

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