Sunday, May 19, 2013

Life Is Short Comments

Rating: 4.9

Live the life you love
Love the life you live
For it is very short
And can never be bought
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Patricia Grantham
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Melissa Patty 25 August 2015

True message! Life is too short to waste, you don't know what's coming round the corner until its gone! Live for each moment...

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Ken E Hall 24 August 2015

Excellent lessen on how to live ones lot and may I say I follow to the tee as you say...sure is short...well written indeed...regards

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* Sunprincess * 07 August 2015

.......very nice...and I agree, so true ★

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Unwritten Soul 18 July 2013

I love the positive messages you birth in your poem everywhere..they shining like stars..this one too! ! _Soul

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Heather Wilkins 17 July 2013

this is an excellent poem on the important things in life. Life is made for living so true. I enjoyed the read.

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Adeline Foster 12 July 2013

Interesting thoughts on the brevity of life. Read mine - Bloom of Youth - Adeline

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Vijay Sai R 26 June 2013

very good poem on life

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R.j. Wynn 13 June 2013

You have great talent, thanks for stopping by and check out Cluck, Cluck.

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Neela Nath Das 06 June 2013

A wise thought.More and more, this demand makes us unhappy.Hankering after the riches, the desired things we try to touch the sky.This leads us to despondency.Really, we should live our life whatever it it is, at first.

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Louis Rams 05 June 2013

enjoy this moment for it will be gone, and regrets will linger on.

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We have one chance to live. Just live it. Thanks for the poem.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 26 May 2013

The very first para' is highly captivating and as one moves along the poem speaks of great philosophy in simple terms! The culmination is the crown ! LOVELY, Patricia!

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Valerie Dohren 26 May 2013

Very wise. Great poem with food for thought.

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Kavya . 23 May 2013

excellent poem...yes and u said, Live the Life you Love, Love the Life you Live', as we only have once chance n live it to the fullest!

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Edwina Reizer 20 May 2013

Now, there you go. Just a hint and you already are on your way to a big improvement. I love this., Your poet friend, Edwina Reizer

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Kanav Justa 20 May 2013

the positivity was great... so was the message, , , life is short indeed, , , , one should enjoy every moment of it, , , though its easier said than done, , ,

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Joseph Anderson 19 May 2013

I love the brevity in this little gem. You said so much with no wasted words/Great subject matter Very, very good and sound advice. Surely a 10

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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