Sunday, September 6, 2015

Life Is Rough When One Is Over The Hill (Italian Sonnet) Comments

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Life Is Rough When One Is Over The Hill (Italian Sonnet)

My love for you burns hotter than a flame
A flame which not even water may quench
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Kim Barney 06 September 2015

Yes, it is a sonnet, and it's certainly not the worst one ever written; in fact I think it is very good. Correct number of lines, good rhyme scheme. Well done.

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