When you love your life
You will do the things you like
No matter what others say
You are right in your eyes
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A fabulous poem! My favorite lines: When you love your life/You will do the things you like/No matter what others say/You are right in your eyes....Thanks for sharing....10
Rini, this is quite good. Live today to the full- - We aren't promised tomorrow, and don't know what it might bring!
You cover a lot of philosophical ground here, Rini, in a relatively short piece. Exhortation to live out one's own destiny, to live existentially in the moment, to ignore the criticisms of the hypocritical bystanders. All sound wisdom, lyrically presented. Make it beautiful!
No matter what others say! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.