Life Is Once Poem by Rini Shibu

Life Is Once

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When you love your life
You will do the things you like
No matter what others say
You are right in your eyes
People are interested to take
speck from your eyes
When they are not perfect
then why to worry
Life is once, make it beautiful
tomorrow you may not get a chance
Live to the fullest

Friday, February 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 February 2018

So true. A very inspiring write well penned.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 February 2018

No matter what others say! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 February 2018

A fabulous poem! My favorite lines: When you love your life/You will do the things you like/No matter what others say/You are right in your eyes....Thanks for sharing....10

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Rini Shibu 18 February 2018

Thanks Dillip..glad that you liked it

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Practicing Poetess 17 February 2018

Rini, this is quite good. Live today to the full- - We aren't promised tomorrow, and don't know what it might bring!

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Rini. 17 February 2018

Thanks dear poetess for your wonderful comment

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Seamus O Brian 17 February 2018

You cover a lot of philosophical ground here, Rini, in a relatively short piece. Exhortation to live out one's own destiny, to live existentially in the moment, to ignore the criticisms of the hypocritical bystanders. All sound wisdom, lyrically presented. Make it beautiful!

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Rini. 17 February 2018

Thanks a lot Seamus for sharing your remarks..

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Lamar Cole 16 February 2018

Great poem about living life to the fullest.

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Rini Shibu 17 February 2018

Thanks Lamar for reading..! !

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