Monday, February 2, 2009

Life Is Not Always Fair And Unfortunately Sometimes We Have To Play The Victim Comments

Rating: 5.0

A cold harsh winter
Leaves the poor thing suffering from hunger
The ground is hard and icy
So he runs elsewhere to find shelter
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Malcolm Bacchus
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Greenwolfe 1962 03 February 2009

A good short form poem with a message as clear as a bell. This is the way poems should be. I loved it. The writing was crisp as well. GW62

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Florence P. Wordsmith 03 February 2009

I too have felt like I have escaped tragedy, only to wind up inside the innards of a feline.

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