Thursday, March 8, 2018

Life Is More Calm And Peaceful [ 2 Tanka ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

I diluted pain
Thrown the bitterness away
And emptied my heart
Transmuted sadness to joy
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 November 2022

Excellent poetry dear poetess. Loved the way you have divulged facets of life here. Full marks dear poetess. Stay always happy, healthy and blessed.

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Kostas Lagos 08 March 2018

Great tanka poems! The message flows through the lines!

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Bipasha D 08 March 2018

Yes, with a change of perspective pain can be diluted and joy can be gained. And when peace resides, the heart is full of love. Lovely expressions. Definitely a 10

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Nudershada Cabanes

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