Saturday, July 2, 2011

Life Is Lost In You Comments

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Life is difficult as we know it is now
Life is rough as we spiral out of control
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Marilee Morley
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Clara Odelia Ciutara 11 July 2011

this poem is nice to read. you; re good at figuring about life. i like this poem, especially the last verse, in which you wisely said, 'you can always get back up and fight for your right to stay in this world no matter what the people in life say or do you belong here and that's that' i really like the message you're trying to tell. nice poem :)

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Yakima WA
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