Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Life Is Like A Pencil Comments

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people say life
is like a pencil
every time it breaks
or goes blunt
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demi buxton
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 May 2009

A brand new fresh image of life. It is also important what you write with this pencil. Beautiful poem, Demi. Keep writing..........10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Sidi Mahtrow 30 April 2009

Good thing about most pencils is that They have an eraser to take back Thoughts that were put to paper And one wishes to change later. But life's not a line in sand That can be erased by tide or man But is recorded as in stone To be reviewed when you're alone And in the end, best of all When your friends say, 'You stood Tall.' s

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Joseph Poewhit 28 April 2009

Interesting analogy of life - the point

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