people say life
is like a pencil
every time it breaks
or goes blunt
...
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Good thing about most pencils is that They have an eraser to take back Thoughts that were put to paper And one wishes to change later. But life's not a line in sand That can be erased by tide or man But is recorded as in stone To be reviewed when you're alone And in the end, best of all When your friends say, 'You stood Tall.' s
A brand new fresh image of life. It is also important what you write with this pencil. Beautiful poem, Demi. Keep writing..........10/10. Best Wishes Naseer