Life is like a painter
Who paints a beautiful picture
Of a mother who showers her baby
Colors of water steadily
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An excellent poem. The last stanza is especially powerful and evocative. Warm regards, Sandra
I specially like the end...the stroke of living.... in your hands.... love it
a nice picture in your head when you wrote this poem. wonderful.
yusof-this is really a Wow! poem. Your meaning is deep and well stated. I loved the rhythm and flow of it. Good work. kat
The title and the content of the poem is the aromatic flavor of life. I like this poem much and added my 10.