Monday, April 25, 2011

Life Is Hard Not Soft Comments

Rating: 5.0

In bitter or grim or such malicious
I stand trembling on
Moving with heart of gold
To life's beyond
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Brendan M. Rumney
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Christine Ogutu 12 May 2011

This is my best, I love the way you portray life and your diction is so wonderful. Keep going.

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Brendan M. Rumney

Brendan M. Rumney

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