You know yourself; your time is hard,
But O'Dear, Don't lose your heart.
Days may be dark, Nights could be worse,
But O'Dear, Don't lose your nerves.
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its such an inspiring poem.. I loved it... its giving me hope... and making me believe this too shall pass.. Nice simple words and good presentation. thanks for sharing...
Marvellous peace of work Anubhav, Your uplifting words to take your friend out from the darkness are so amazing that anyone can feel the depthness of thoughts that you tried to put in your poem. A10 for this lovely peace, I feel honoured if you can spare some time and give give your valuable comments and Ratings on my poems. Thanks for Sharing. Regards, Priyaa Arora
Life is hard thats for sure but with this kind of advice things will always befine...uplifting words. Beautiful composition indeed a 10.
You know yourself; Days may be dark, Nights could be worse, Don't get Depressed. Success would be yours; you will win like a fighter. i collected all these points from your poem. yes against all odds we have to hope against all hopelessness. we are going to win. this is a poem of positive determination. love this poem. tony