life is a bird with broken wings
that cannot fly into the sky
life is a barren land
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Gratitude Robert. . I'll check it out... I'm humbled.
Gratitude Dr. Tony Brahmin. I'm humbled to thee. Thanks for the read and comment.
pessimistic note shall not be for ever. life is to be lived. and as you try it there are treasures hidden in it. thank you dear poet for beautiful expressions and comparisons.
Indeed, life may sound fine and lovely but ultimately signifies nothing - vanity upon vanity. An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing.