I count, I count, I wield, I wield
And I will leave, my presence felt.
It’s ego’s cry.
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nice write...cry is a fine expression of life's facets...emotions of happiness, sadness, pain etc...Great repeatition of words and parallelism in structure of lines...10+++
Superb write with great style Really captivating stuff. I tried somethin like this in sonnet metre AT THIS BRINK.
wow............superb write there sir, ...how true how well thought out.................... well done i cry cry! !
life is a cry but that's why God has sent his gift of a smile to balance it......