Life Is Constant Comments

Kati Arana likes this. Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 16 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

Feelings Bobby Childress52 minutes ago The poem conveys the negative aspect of anger, and hate while indicating that love an hate are exact opposites. Comment +1 great!

Patti Woosley52 minutes ago I like this very much.

two sides to life Shana Walker51 minutes ago I get that you are trying to compare and describe the good and bad in life, but in some parts you lost me. Its has good potential though, i like where it was going

Needs more work Hashan Mannan40 minutes ago No clear and well expressed theme or story. For instance - 'It may take only few second To become drop of water in pond' What does it mean? Again - 'As bubbles appear and disappear Life is constant and remains in gear' What relation between bubbles and life here? Punctuation are also required. Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago Birth is taking place out of 5 elementsi.e body is made of earth, fire, air etc and after death it merges with same.. means going back to oirignal place... in seconds it will become drop means it will again go backk to its origin that is pond..... life is of and off in universe meaning howmany may be taking birth daily and vanishing in..... it is clear dear, , jsut philosophy well established

Cool Ziggy ZiggyLess than a minute ago Wow, Impressive sir, good stuff. I like the ending alot.

Pain and anger are no good managers It has only one appetite that is hunger Pain eats up conscious

Pain and anger are no good managers It has only one appetite that is hunger Pain eats up conscious