Life Is Calling. Comments

Fantastic empathic Poem…truly stirring our souls… Ten dr.sakti

Yes, life is calling sister. It's a nice composition.

ver nice words, lets walk into the new life... with rose buds as carpets

i'm coming, the saviour is coming to fix the irregularities, but who would join me? i just can't use my powerful words alone to rectify the matter unless the perpetrators are the actors, nothing more than that.then life would be easier.

Expressive words, heartfelt lines, one can see the experienced pain, very touching. very well crafted, wish future generation get a message from this poem, let life call for a better tomorrow

very nice title for a poem. poem is good too. life is complicated no doubt. but lit a candle of hope and you'll see a different view of life. that is my promise try it. take care

ummmmmmm Nice Complicated pic the suits a Complicated life

pathos of city life..

I like this poem of yours. You have nicely used the words, and painted a complicated picture through your thoughts. Have a nice day, Gaurav

ANOTHER 10 FOR YOU MY DEAR. Wonderful, deep and so sophisticated intellect that results into such bright writing. I dont like dark, but that is life now in so many aspects, dark is trying to prevail, but yes there is hope, when and how? but there is. At the end of the dark tunnel there is always light, maybe not during our life, God only knows, but light will come and supersed. wonderful write. keep writing my dear. just beautiful

You have achieved depth in the images and the poem has power. You capture a world of much brutality. I hope that someday things change for the better. But you might have a long wait for the sons of Adam. Keep writing xoubiya. You are brave and intelligent.

some nice images filled the page, it's kind of dark as the you are describing the way as it just is. i liked it.. MOusheera shafik