Thursday, December 27, 2012

Life Is But A Roaring Stream Comments

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Life is but a roaring stream
Where upon this boat is to swim
This boat of carporal frame
Now the boatman has to hail is
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Vivek Tiwari
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Valsa George 28 December 2012

We have to sail to the bank, cutting through roaring waters with all our might with a sense of drection and a sense of purpose ! Otherwise our boat will capsize and we will sink down into the black streams! A good poem! !

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Barbara Nixon 28 December 2012

Great poem, powerful imagery!

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