Tuesday, December 15, 2015

Life Is Beyond The Ifs Comments

Rating: 5.0

Should you have been born in a hut,
where there is hunger,
where there are hardships,
where there are not sufficient means,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 May 2017

The heat of love! Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 16 December 2015

We always try to imagine things.... like 'if it happened or if only'! Better learn to accept facts and try to find joy and love in whatever situation we are in! A great write Akhtarji!

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Nosheen Irfan 16 December 2015

Deep insight and vision reflected in the poem. Certainly a very mature piece that sets you thinking and stays with you a while.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2015

Very thought provoking and insightful poem shared definitely. Giving us heat of love in hopes where sun rises with interesting view is fantastic in expression of thought. Wisely expressed poem...10

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Kelly Kurt 15 December 2015

An insightful, well written and poignant piece.

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Hazel Durham 15 December 2015

Life is about being positive in whatever situation we find ourselves in, to see that love is freedom of the heart to find the truth in our lover's eyes and to never have to say 'If only'! Beautiful and thought provoking write!

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 15 December 2015

amazing... I liked it very much.thanks

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Shakil Ahmed 15 December 2015

a wonderful poem, thanks for sharing

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