I saw this bud
unfold into a flower
Each tiny petal bloom into beauty
The dew drops holding onto softness
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loved the flow and use of imagery is awesome (I know its too cliched a word to describe this piece of writing but still...)
this poem made me of soggy cold days again saw the rain wash away heat bringing cold into the barren land I smile to myself that I got lucky I found beauty all around me
Life is beautiful the poem is beautiful certainly your heart is beautiful! 10++++++++++
This poem of yours is simply amazing and this brings out your love for nature and your simplistic view in life which is all about being positive unconditionally, though i am not an expert in reading poems, i was able to recognize myself with these verses! the best of your collection so far, keep it up! go on with your good work!
Seeing beauty in everything around...seeing unfolding life every where...a good message here...brought out in well framed lines...good piece, Nandhini...I give you 10
Why see pain when you can see happiness Why see terror when you can see Smiles God made beauty to nullify pain To make you smile even in pain Beautiful inspiring lines... this poem has got beuatiful use of imagery and touching words and has also got such a great psychotherapeutic effect... Good one...10