Thursday, April 16, 2009

Life Is A Train Comments

Rating: 5.0

(When the body of a loco piolet is taken from his quarters, he makes a last whimsical look at his own life) .
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As my body passes the gate,
A long whistle is heard.
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Ravi Panamanna
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 August 2009

lfe is journey and at cross time alway.. beautiful poem with clear message....10 read mine at cross road

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Subbaraman N V 24 April 2009

Yes; that is the human life! It is foolish to fight and shout! Let us love and serve, helping ever hurting never!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 16 April 2009

Life is the train and Nirvana is the last junction....................Good Write..........

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Fiona Davidson 16 April 2009

Excellent write....10+++

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may be we will be unseen witness to what happens after we go..though sad...a lovely picture ot the train

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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