Monday, November 14, 2016

Life Is A Train To Arrive Comments

Rating: 5.0

We travel visit and return,
Through journey we learn.
Beautiful moments does tell,
Time in mind rings new bell.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Varsha M 11 September 2021

Contd....we travel we believe we move and make history.very encouraging. Thankyou.

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Varsha M 11 September 2021

Yes sir life is a train journey and destination is our destiny

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Life is a train - a journey in quest of the truth....excellent metaphor. Top marks dear Kumarmani ji

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Roxanne Dubarry 13 June 2020

Kumarmani Mahakul Is a Christian philosopher with a deep love of the natural world of his native India! His poems are truly delightful and a pleasure to read. He is an extremely talented younger poet and an asset to the poetic community. God will richly bless the fruits of his poetic labors of love!

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Marilyn Lott 20 May 2020

A beautiful poem of nature and life. Very calming to the spirit and enjoyable. I enjoyed it very much and also the sweet picture of nature as well.

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Life has meaning and leaning on good things to follow... lovely poem.. clearly...10

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Rajendran Muthiah 08 April 2020

Train travels in rail tracks but life on the sea of earth' s backs. Wonderful imagination!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 23 April 2019

a spiritual poem inspiring readers. thanks

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Lyn Paul 14 February 2019

Such calm and wisdom in your words. You are an inspiration to others.

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Savita Tyagi 16 December 2018

Life has a meaning and a celebration and work is our salvation. A beautiful rhythmic poem indeed.

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Suratha Kumar Rout 07 October 2018

Dear poet it is poem with great value. Nice. Thanks for sharing. 10++++

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Abhipsa Panda 06 October 2018

Really very true sir... Life is a journey where we learn so many things.....

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Parameswaran Nair(DPN) 21 September 2018

Life is a travel to eternity catching the train of births. Nice

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Robert Murray Smith 13 June 2018

A great metaphor for life. We all have a timetable.++10

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Jose Baez 15 February 2018

Hi Kumarmani, I want to thank you for the comment you made on I did love you, gave me the opportunity to read many of your spiritual poetry, and I really enjoyed them, even though I write love poems, I also enjoy writing for Jehovah our Creator. Jose Baez

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Seema Chowdhury 10 October 2017

Lovely and accurate comparison, life is like a train waiting to arrive. Lovely theme

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Ashika Murali Acharya 29 August 2017

A new perspective, loved it!

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 November 2016

Facing life with our works! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2016

picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x...a beautiful metaphor...life is a journey by train ★ 21 Mar 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Just Arun xI like 21 Mar 2015 by Just Arun | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xLovely lovely lovely poem xoxoxo tfs 21 Mar 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Michael Cardinal xexquisite metaphors. eternal tracks keep this lovely train from derailing. 21 Mar 2015 by Michael Cardinal | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xvery beautifully penned 22 Mar 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply

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