We travel visit and return,
Through journey we learn.
Beautiful moments does tell,
Time in mind rings new bell.
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Life is a train - a journey in quest of the truth....excellent metaphor. Top marks dear Kumarmani ji
Kumarmani Mahakul Is a Christian philosopher with a deep love of the natural world of his native India! His poems are truly delightful and a pleasure to read. He is an extremely talented younger poet and an asset to the poetic community. God will richly bless the fruits of his poetic labors of love!
A beautiful poem of nature and life. Very calming to the spirit and enjoyable. I enjoyed it very much and also the sweet picture of nature as well.
Life has meaning and leaning on good things to follow... lovely poem.. clearly...10
Train travels in rail tracks but life on the sea of earth' s backs. Wonderful imagination!
Such calm and wisdom in your words. You are an inspiration to others.
Life has a meaning and a celebration and work is our salvation. A beautiful rhythmic poem indeed.
Dear poet it is poem with great value. Nice. Thanks for sharing. 10++++
Really very true sir... Life is a journey where we learn so many things.....
Life is a travel to eternity catching the train of births. Nice
Hi Kumarmani, I want to thank you for the comment you made on I did love you, gave me the opportunity to read many of your spiritual poetry, and I really enjoyed them, even though I write love poems, I also enjoy writing for Jehovah our Creator. Jose Baez
Lovely and accurate comparison, life is like a train waiting to arrive. Lovely theme
Facing life with our works! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x...a beautiful metaphor...life is a journey by train ★ 21 Mar 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Just Arun xI like 21 Mar 2015 by Just Arun | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xLovely lovely lovely poem xoxoxo tfs 21 Mar 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Michael Cardinal xexquisite metaphors. eternal tracks keep this lovely train from derailing. 21 Mar 2015 by Michael Cardinal | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xvery beautifully penned 22 Mar 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply
Contd....we travel we believe we move and make history.very encouraging. Thankyou.