Wednesday, January 12, 2011

Life Is A Teacher. Comments

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Life is a puzzle that challenges the master mind
Life is a struggle
Life is commitment
Life is a mystery
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Lucia Domingos Fula
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Mohammad Muzzammil 02 February 2011

Really nice poem! Your poem contains true message regarding life. It is truth that life is a great teacher who teaches the lessons that we have never leant by one else.

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sorry to tell you that but honestly i didnt like it. it doesnt abide with any style of poetry. i mean why you repeat the word life. your idea is quite good but repeating the word life is pretty boring

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Mohammad Muzzammil 17 January 2011

Yes, life is the greatest teacher that teaches us the lesson that we have never learnt.

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Mohammad Muzzammil 17 January 2011

Yes, life is a teacher that teaches us the lessons.

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Henry Brown 12 January 2011

I like it. Well said....keep going! ! ! ! !

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Lucia Domingos Fula

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