Monday, October 26, 2009

Life Is A Prison Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is a prison,
Oh God let me out.
No one to listen,
To hear when you shout.
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Victoria Golden
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Adi Cox 27 October 2009

I like this poem. You really seem to be saying something here. The way I read it is that you seem to be soul searching trying to find a way forward in a life that is constrained by rules and regulations and trying to navigate a future with no clear direction. I too am an inmate doing a life constrained by society. I have found solace in creative writing. It has set my imagination free. This is my escape and I can relate to this poem. Excellent writing 10/10.

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. . 26 October 2009

BRILLIANT PIECE VICTORIA! ! ! ! ! ! ! :)

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