Friday, May 22, 2009

Life Is A Hunt (Warning Adult Theme) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm all alone and nowhere to be found,
A life in darkness not even a sound,
Your name i scream but you don't hear,
In a world of my own I'm living in fear,
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John Wollenzien 18 December 2013

Love the pace of the poem, as well as the feeling of the scene.

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A perfect life is a terrible lie, a beautiful line. nice write. shan

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Lance Mead

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