Saturday, September 26, 2015

Life Is A Game Of Chess Comments

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Life is a game of Chess
We, are the Pawns
We fight to reach the top, taking one step at a time only to be redundant
While the Knight stops us in our tracks
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Melissa L Tamayo
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Roseann Shawiak 26 September 2015

Very interesting thoughts on life, comparing it to a chess game is brilliant! Using the chess pieces to depict the different people standing in the way of our freedom and preventing us from getting ahead in life. Very true to life, your poem parallels it quite a bit! Great poem! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Melissa L Tamayo

Melissa L Tamayo

Bronx, NY
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