Friday, May 31, 2019

Life Is A Compromise Comments

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A compromise of energy having remained lonely in nothingness,
A compromise of millions of years to cool down and become matter,
A compromise to be tied; just to think, to love and to reproduce,
A compromise to follow a discipline for an arrangement latter,
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Savita Tyagi 10 July 2019

Beautiful! The word compromise despised by most has been elevated to its just place. Truly life is nothing but a compromise. Hardest thing to compromise with is our own declining energy. But we learn.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 June 2019

BUT FOR YOU I WOULD HAVE NEVER BEEN KNOW SIR AJ Ji

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 June 2019

Compromise, a lovely poem full of philosophy. Life is a compromise between negative and positive forces as a poet here said. Between two poles a spectrum, one is free to choose the spot, call it a compromise or choice, the choice is yours..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 June 2019

Life is full of compromises. A fair deal that assures us no one is above the others. A.wonderful write.

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 June 2019

Life is a compromise of positive and negative forces. A philosophic poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 June 2019

JUST TOO EXCELLENT COMING FROM U SIR JA JI

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 June 2019

A beautiful poem sir with some inbuilt message...................................................10

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