Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Life Is A Chasing Game, Comments

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In the narrow dawny morning lane,
Old witch was going back on her way,
Heard; birds were singing with gay,
Who has broken witch's window pane?
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Sallam Yassin 22 October 2014

beautiful canvas with a paint where the lives are in a pace / bravo

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Paul Sebastian 22 October 2014

It is beautiful poem on our chasing and searching life dreams, to become something worthwhile. It rhymes well the picture you painted is provoking. enjoyed it.

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Heather Wilkins 21 October 2014

Life is a chasing game beginning to end this is so true nice writing

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Heather Wilkins 21 October 2014

Life is a chasing game beginning to end this is so true nice writing

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Heather Wilkins 21 October 2014

Life is a chasing game beginning to end this is so true nice writing

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