Life Is Comments

Made up of construction And some self destruction Rachel Ann Butler

very practical down to earth useful suggestion yo give here, Scott...after all it's a co-journey...isn't it? good write...thanks...10

You have a point. Self destruction is a shortcut and it seems so easy, but this poem doesn't suggest to do that. It suggests to ask for help which is good. keep up the good work. :)

Too true Scott - - and life can be a strong challenge for us all - - - a very discerning piece of verse.............. a 10 +

Very wise words, I like the way you wrote this poem.....10

this poem gives a good sensible advice...heaven helps those who help themselves...and helping themselves means accepting help from others with gratitude...good piece, Scott...ten for you

Great advice that I need to follow. Wonderful outlook!

Life is really define as you put it in your poetry. There's a lot of twist and turns that one may never know what will one lead to. Another good poem, indeed.

you are so right in this poem and some people need to get that understanding. I love it! !

That's to my liking. Read my poem 'five', it's the same story.