Life’s beauty is breathtaking when we take a moment to observe it.
Life is horrible when it takes an unexpected turn.
Life is amazing when we are satisfied with the events around us.
Life is hectic when we have a million errands to complete.
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Amazing! Life is put into perspective when we read poetry.. ha ha thank you very much you really made me realise just how in control of our own destines we are
Great poem, great message, but I suggest you change 'except' to accept and place a semicolon in the last line after 'life'. I give you a 10.
Hey this is Sierra, The one who wrote this poem. Well that profile is messed up so click on this name I'm commenting under and my poems will be there. Thanks bye.