Friday, May 8, 2009

Life Inside My Bubble Comments

Rating: 5.0

My bubble is invisible
But it is surely there
Nothing can get threw it,
Not one single hair
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Bhaswat Chakraborty 19 May 2009

Your style is very fluid, very vivid.

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Saadat Tahir 18 May 2009

longing search gaze daze..all...put together in a beautiful aggressive style nice read cheers

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Sidi Mahtrow 08 May 2009

Watch the bubble floating free Drifting with the wind - that's where it wants to be. But wait, bubbles are but soap suds in the air And when the humidity drops, pop and they're not there. So before you escape from your bubble To find the real world with its endless trouble Perhaps you should enjoy the ride Forgetting your search for some perfect Tom, Dick or Clyde. s

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