Saturday, October 29, 2016

Life In The Fast Lane. Comments

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In the beginning life is new.
We giggle and laugh at mummy, and even daddy too.
As we grow, we learn to talk and walk and feel.
we cant wait to get our next meal.
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Jacqueline Dube
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Chinedu Dike 29 October 2016

An insightful depiction of journey of life as a circle, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Lovely poem nicely brought forth in beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Jacqueline. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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