Wednesday, December 23, 2015

Life In Its Nakedness Comments

Rating: 4.9

Life is never a fairy tale
Where everything ends in style
Lands of princes and princesses
Remain only in Dream's recesses
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 December 2015

We need solid action no doubt. Everyone gives high sounding messages without trying to follow them up with implementation. Excellently delivered in a beautiful verse.

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Akhtar Jawad 27 December 2015

Life is an enigma, one can't understand and define it, one thing is definite life itself regrets it that is why on every new day we are a little more close to death.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 December 2015

Life is far from being fantastic To believe otherwise is quixotic...Definitely this is very wise, interesting and thought provoking poem shared here. Very amazing definitely.10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 December 2015

Very true. Evil gets rewarded as we see it. People get tempted to follow this for short term gain. The poem opens our eyes to the truth. Thank you.

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Hazel Durham 24 December 2015

Life can be so unfair it is no fairytale, but I firmly believe what goes around comes around, action is needed to right the wrongs of this world, a powerful and great write!

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Rajesh Thankappan 23 December 2015

Life is a strange broth with, as you have pointed out, uncertainties ruling the roost.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 December 2015

So true! Life is never a fairy tale! And there is no guarantee for anything. In today's world- violence has taken the upper hand. But as you rightly pointed out in your poem, hollow words cannot make a change. Each individual should strive to act in order to make the world peaceful! Thank you for sharing the facts of life through Life in its nakedness a poem so thought provoking.

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Kelly Kurt 23 December 2015

Words are a catalyst but actions will bring change

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Akhtar Jawad 23 December 2015

Life is far from being fantastic To believe otherwise is quixotic Evil is never punished as one deserves And virtue never recognized as one craves But why it is so? If there is an Almighty God, why it's so?

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 December 2015

Evil is never punished as one deserves on this earth. Nice work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 December 2015

Virtues, vices, good as also bad these are all relative concepts in my opinion established by social animal called human being with thinking capacity since stone age for some specific reasons. Even then history tells us might is always right. In addition, rewards too never go in favor of those who truely deserve. Here comes the concept of fate. Any way all these jumbling thoughts are very intricate. They do trouble righteous people some times. But they should be ignored and efforts be made to move forward happily. Merry Christmas.

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 December 2015

Absolutely true. The belief that good work is rewarded and wrong is punished at sometime has no base. so many people work hard all through their lives but die as hungry and poor. Nice work.

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