Sunday, May 28, 2017

Life In Black And White Comments

Rating: 5.0

Painted my life in black and white
On starry night the moon was bright
Used the brush to prime the canvas
Dipped in black to shade my past
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Rini Shibu
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Unnikrishnan E S 16 June 2017

Hi Rini, This poem is a revelation. That the colors of Black and White, often scorned by us, has such beauty! ! Choice of words you have used to enhance the image is inimitable wonderful, Used the brush to prime the canvas - -to PRIME the canvas- Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! And then, Dipped in black to shade my past! ! ! ! ! Your poem has left my entire body almost trembling! ! The metaphor of music for painting left me panting: : Like music played on piano keys Image with hard line and soft lines... And shades of lights and shadows... No colors to distract the beauty - - - The statement that colors DISTRACT beauty is, to state it most mildly, startling... And of course, Clearer image towards the destiny. Very novel line of thinking.., A sharp look at the other side of life. Your ability to find colors on the colorless canvas! ! ! Good! ! A 10+++++

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Rini Shibu 17 June 2017

Thanks for your sharp analysis

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Tom Allport 04 June 2017

a beautiful poem that brings music to my ears and it also helps me to forgive lost tears? ...........well written.

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Rini Shibu 04 June 2017

Thanks for your comments...... Rini

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Hans Vr 03 June 2017

Reading the poem was a pleasure. Then looking at the picture, I went wow Together poem an picture form such wonderful and complete piece of art. Excellent! Super!

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Rini Shibu 04 June 2017

Thanks Hans... Rini

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Gajanan Mishra 31 May 2017

colorful song of life, great write

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Rini Shibu 31 May 2017

Thanks Gajanan..

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Siddartha Montik 29 May 2017

Particularly liked the Stanza No colors to distract the beauty! Nice Poem in Black and White! 10

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Rini Shibu 29 May 2017

Look into the souls in black and white rather the beauty of colors..

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 May 2017

Dipped in black to shade my past! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 28 May 2017

Thank u..

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Life in black and white. Excellent!

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Rini Shibu 28 May 2017

Thank you Akham

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